The first thing I did was research. I used the articles Dr.
McVerry posted on blackboard, and supplemented that with two other sources I
found online. Once I found the sources,
I highlighted the quotes I wanted to use and typed them out. Then I organized
the quotes according to the paragraphs in which I would use them.
The introduction is usually my favorite part of writing a
paper (except for the thesis statement, which causes me a lot of stress!). The
introduction verbalizes my thoughts, and it reinforces my point of view. For some reason it is good to have my point
of view in writing. Now I can relax and
stop worrying about forgetting what I was going to say, which happens to me
often!
It takes me a few hours to write a first draft of a paper. My problem with writing an informative paper
is that I have to use a more formal voice.
I feel uncomfortable doing that, and prefer to write in the same manner
in which I speak. I feel like I can get
my point across better that way.
However, when I compare my process of writing to the first informative
paper I had to write two semesters ago, I find that I have much improved. Another problem I have with writing a formal
paper is citing, especially when I use two quotes from the same source and they
follow each other closely, only separated by a single sentence. Do I cite it
twice, or only once?
I thought it was extremely helpful to have a classmate peer
review my paper. Sometimes I know what I want to write, and because I am so
familiar with the paper and my own thoughts, I think I am getting my point
across. However, when another person reads my paper it is new to them, and she
can point out the areas where there is confusion and where more elaboration is
needed. This feedback was very important to me.
If it is a direct quote you include the author, title and page number.
ReplyDeleteFirst you need to ask yourself in the quote is necessary. I try to save them for the juciest little knowledge nuggets that an author drops. If it is a pedestrian idea why not just summarize the point. Then you can get away with citing the author only once in a a paragraph.
I agonize over my introductions. They are so much fun to write.